#Writing & adverbs:
Adverbs give The Reader more information:
⚈ "He carefully held the baby."
⚈ "She quickly ran from the scene."
⚈ "They cared for each other dearly."
But too many will weaken verbs and degrade otherwise strong, bold writing.
Better to replace adverbs with more descriptive, definitive verbs:
⚈ "He cradled the baby."
⚈ "She sprinted from the scene."
⚈ "They loved each other."
Ah, yes, better.
#copywriting #marketing
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Posted by Eddie Shleyner on LinkedIn
link: linkedin.com/in/eshleyner
Adverbs give The Reader more information:
⚈ "He carefully held the baby."
⚈ "She quickly ran from the scene."
⚈ "They cared for each other dearly."
But too many will weaken verbs and degrade otherwise strong, bold writing.
Better to replace adverbs with more descriptive, definitive verbs:
⚈ "He cradled the baby."
⚈ "She sprinted from the scene."
⚈ "They loved each other."
Ah, yes, better.
#copywriting #marketing
P.S. below 👇
Posted by Eddie Shleyner on LinkedIn
link: linkedin.com/in/eshleyner