NEED YOUR OPINION. (COPY)

Sometimes, I intentionally make my sentences long so readers are out of breath
after they read them.

So they'll feel that the magnitude of the things that they've done in the past
that didn't work out.

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Example:

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At one point (or maybe until now)...

You may have consulted and hired data analysts, measurement marketers, and
digital marketing experts.

You’ve given up on figuring out ad tracking on your own.

You've let the experts do it.

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What do you think?

Yay nor nay?



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